Tuesday, December 14, 2010
Post your THESIS statements here!
Hi everyone! Now that you learned more about what a Thesis Statement is, please share your thesis statement here. REMEMBER: It's not due until MONDAY 12/20 so make sure you do A LOT of research and gather enough information before you come up with your thesis. Remember, I think a Three-Point Thesis Statement is the best.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Thesis statement of my topic, Family Violence is:
ReplyDeleteVictims of family violence can get help from many ways, not only law but also some helpful program sysytems because before prople get protection from laws, the court needs a lot of time to get evidence to help sufferers in their situation, therefore there are three ways victims can get out from their situation, Therapy Programs, the National Domestic Violence Hotline and get police and courts' help.
Transition from war to peace is a very crucial time for a country and only those countries can successfully build peace which totally eliminate the element of corruption from their government.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteRice as a staple food in China is irreplaceable because of its economic, cultural and edible importance for the country and its people.
ReplyDeleteTeens sleep late because the biological reasons,sleeping disorders and their decision like playing computer, watch moive, cell phone and so on.
ReplyDeleteHip-Hop dance should be taken deeper into society because it is more like a sport; competitive, recreational, and good exercise to the whole body system.
ReplyDeleteStruggles teenages mothers.
ReplyDeleteBecoming a mother during the teenage years is a difficult struggle for these young women, because of their youth they had to face unique problems than many adult mothers don't.
Teenagers should take hair dye allergy test or skin allergy test before they dye hair.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteEven though arranged marriages occur due to the family pressure and the will of the spouses' parents, but the couple after marriage adjust themselves and compromise for each other's feelings for the sake of their parent's respect.
ReplyDeleteGoing to college is important, also we would get some benefit from college. College education can help us to develop our skills, we will get the better job and earn more money than people who does not have college education, higher education can make our society better.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteThe Beatles had the great influence all over the world, they not only influenced on rock & roll, but also influenced on pop culture and their fans.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteSmoking cigarettes is very dangerous for human health;it causes cancer, increases asthma problems and risks while pregnancy
ReplyDeleteConfucianism was considered a utopian vision,he was teaching people how to be niceness because he lived in a period which was during the war. Confucianism affected Chinese culture as a great philosophy by food culture, education and manner.
ReplyDeleteCigarette contains nicotine that is a harmful drug for human's nervous system because it persuades brain to use nicotine again and again and lead to death.
ReplyDeleteWe should turn off the cellphone at night because using cellphone at night can affect sleeping, make stress system and also can cause canser.
ReplyDeleteRose is popular in the world. Red rose is a symbolic of love. People usually give roses to their lovers as Valentine's gifts.
ReplyDeleteTeens may smoke for different reasons, usually teens smoke to get attention, or to be cool but some smoke due to stress and to overcome their weight(teen girls).Today teens smoking rate is increasing rapidly so not only parents but government also should be involved in the mission of rescuing teens from nicotine addiction,
ReplyDeleteThesis statement: Rose is popular in the world.
ReplyDeletePoint 1: the origins of rose meanings.
Point 2: red rose stands for love and romance.
Point 3: yellow rose stands for friendship.
Conclusion: Rose is popular no matter for love or friendship.
Men in Asian countries think that they are superior than woman when they are tied to them in arranged marriages, most of them beat up woman like animals, arranged marriages are just the results of parents' will and pressure because how can someone marry to person they don't know and had never meet in their life.
ReplyDeleteStruggles teenages mothers.
ReplyDelete2nd Thesis: Teen mothers face adult responsibilities even before they give birth, because financial challenges, emotional harships and medical problems are among the problems these teen mothers face.
Cigarettes contain nicotine, which is bad for your health because it effects your mantel health, persuades your body to become used to of it , and lead to death.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteThesis Statement: Chinese traditional clothing is better than the fashion clothing that we wear now because Chinese traditional clothing shows Chinese national characteristics, it helps the inheritance of Chinese historic culture, and it is more simple, comfortable and elegant.
ReplyDeletethesis statemnt
ReplyDeletenot too many people know and care about their micro-expressions, but the micro-expression is very important and useful, the micro-expressions can help people for understand others true feeling, help people on business and help to spy into the crime.
The negative effects of using cell phone are effective to human health, students' studies and sometimes cell phone ringing leads to the harassment in the public places indirectly.
ReplyDeleteA great influence for maya civilization was their relion which helped them to be a united and educated community that always eforced to be better under their gods' view.
ReplyDeleteSolar energy is becoming a new role to substitute oil in the world because of solar energy is cheaper, it's renewable resource, and there is not any pollution.
ReplyDeleteDepression have a harmful affect on our relationships. Due to depression we think negative and it destroys our health. Also we loose interest in daily life activities and preferences.
ReplyDeleteMy thesis statement:
ReplyDeleteRed rose is considered as a perfect gift on Valentine's Day in the world because: it has a long history representing for love; it has been used to express people's feeling and passion; it is required more than usual flowers.
We should support people when they needed since they commit suicide because of depression, bullying, and hopeless.
ReplyDelete